I don't get it
First of all, I want to say that your style is pretty cool, very smooth and fluently. Now 4 things of the movie I don't like.
- The timing is not okay. I read in many reviews people find your movie to short. You're response: 'why does everyone care so much about length these days?'. Well, I don't think the length is the point although it is very short. I think people don't get the joke because your timing is wrong. People don't get the joke because of it.
- I don't get the point of it. I assume you're trying to make something funny, but I don't get any jokes.
- You're saying you made it loop so we guys could have something to review about, well I do. Don't do that anymore I don't like loopy animations if there is no point in looping. If I want to see a movie again I want to click 'play again'. I don't wanna ask myself: Is the movie over already or does it go on? The music that goes on and on, same story.
- You're saying it is a bear. If you make a bear give it a look of a bear and don't make a giant muscled mouse. That doesn't communicate. because people get more distracted by that.
Because of those 4 things and because of you saying you did it in 9 hours that I find far too much time for this. I'm giving you a 2. Well... the fact that you got frontpage with this maybe is also a reason.
Nevertheless, keep on animating, because I think you can, and the style and quality is there. just work on your story, presentations, jokes and timing.
Thanks for making this